Leslie Ching

Rookie (January 8,1995- / Toronto, ON, Canada)

A World-Reality - Poem by Leslie Ching

A land of make-belief, it seems
Is much more agreeable; it teems
With laughter and joy, and it beams-
But reality is most harshly deemed:

A world of only blacks and whites
Arguments, plenty of fights
Snaps and snarls, growls and bites
A world untouchable by light;

A world of tints and dull grey hues
A world broken, always subdued
Where adults cry, teens sing the blues
Would YOU live here? It’s yours to choose…


Comments about A World-Reality by Leslie Ching

  • Rookie - 126 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (7/4/2009 4:46:00 PM)

    Fantastic poem..... you are a genius aren't you? (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 169 Points marvin brato (5/7/2009 5:29:00 AM)

    Life made miserable
    every existence of man
    seen in this poem
    let each one realize
    its real impact-
    every naked truth! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/5/2009 12:05:00 AM)

    deep thoughts....the stanzaic format wisely used does justice to the theme/ an awarenes raising piece (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 4, 2009



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