About Love Poem by Mohamed Fazloon

About Love

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About Love by Mohamed Fazloon

We are lost in a sentimental love so solemnly magical,
Diluted all thoughts living in prison,
Your eloquent eyelashes lifted by velour curtains,
Lost in love with uncertainties,
Sun used to rise above all the  imaginations,
Into formidable opposite directions,
Waiting forever for a rainy season they were never devious,
Women are creations of meliorism and  melodious,
Like a Ladybird in forestry wilderness retreat,
Flowers ardent not missteps any kind of treat,
Love is like a moody sores infectiously vicious,
Sometimes love will be mysteriously heartbreaking and getting very serious,
Causing distress and deceptively poisonous,
Love conquers the world made us very superstitious!

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About Love
Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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Chinedu Dike 05 November 2015

A good depiction of love - a voyage of bliss that is whimsical and temperamental with many stumbling blocks. Lovely poem insightfully penned with conviction. I like the rhyme scheme of the piece. Thanks for sharing Mohamed.

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

Wonderful poem, Your best writing.........Loved it.

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Mohamed Fazloon 19 October 2015

Thank you Asim. I love your poems too. Keep writing!

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