Adriatic Sea Wash- The Real feelings of The Sea by jasmine maddock

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Adriatic Sea Wash- The Real feelings of The Sea

adriatic sea wash versus pacific terrific wave splash aeons sea in flux
perpetuum mobili swings to shore with the washing powder flume and disarray
order milkshake wave loire seine float farthest Out to spread dreamy pools
blue very depth. imagine the deepest then deep. do oceans dream? of getting a bath or drying out scorched parchment? Ocean forever liquid flowing natural force with quiff wave. Yet not ever needing gel. Sea mind is intellect harbours precious jewels and cute fish. Sea does not mind fish travelling in him. Adds to wave. Sea has a respect for shore though shore is overcome by his water on shores aridity. Soft dreamy warm sand has his own kind of fluidity and drape like a huge gold dress.
When sea is stormy sand takes the brunt of his displaced attitude and lets the wild waves crash over his calm grains. Wild sand is when wild wind agitates and whips up easygoing laidback sand. Never says anything when he is dug by bucket carrying kids raking and patting. If sea
Dug up I know it would be peturbed disturbed crashing a force wave
in a bucket carriers face.
calm gentle pools of rippling with spools of water in little rings and sweet tranquillity
storm mental pools of rippling squall water fierce splash angst salty agitation.

jasmine maddock

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Annie Cordelia Adams (2/11/2008 9:19:00 PM)
VERY descriptive. Salty agitation is a good metaphor to use.