Advertising Poem by Perfection Is Flawed

Advertising

Rating: 5.0


All these mindless cries
that Shout

before you
in such

a wide array of sudden
Colours

because they are there
they always have been

always will be
although

no one
really
listens.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 31 October 2011

You have perfectly advertised yourself through this thought provoking short write! It really caught my eyes! There is no way to publicly advertise oneself when hiding behind a pen name. I truly hope you will come to the open and greet the World with more of your talented works! Poetry really runs in your blood and there is nothing to be afraid of! I am sorry I feel this way but I find a pen name to be like a mask. Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Brian Dorn 03 May 2006

Interesting poem... people do tend to tune out unless something/someone catches their eye/ear... and advertising is one way of getting noticed. Good write! Brian

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