Aged Can See Through-Tanka Poem by narayana aghalaya

Aged Can See Through-Tanka

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the aged can see through
but with smile quickly forgive
their youth was wild too
a punch they can't pack and give
their game-plan: live and let live

Tuesday, July 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,forgiveness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 25 July 2018

Narayana, such a fine tanka...10++++

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Narayana Aghalaya 25 July 2018

Thank you Dr.Bernard, for your appreciation!

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Robert Murray Smith 24 July 2018

Insight is seeing day in night.++10

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Narayana Aghalaya 24 July 2018

Thank you, dear poet, for your appreciation!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2018

Aged persons smile and quickly forgive. Youth punches but they forgive. An amazing perceptional poem is shared here...10

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Narayana Aghalaya 24 July 2018

thank you, dear sir, for you appreciation!

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