Adryan Rotica


Aging Gracefully - Poem by Adryan Rotica

If age is a state of mind-
my mind
is in a terrible state


Comments about Aging Gracefully by Adryan Rotica

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (8/31/2014 8:20:00 PM)

    nice work so is mine short and to the point (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 178 Points Brian Jani (5/29/2014 2:15:00 PM)

    Nice work adryan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 178 Points Brian Jani (5/29/2014 2:15:00 PM)

    Nice work adryan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Con Nie (4/15/2006 3:50:00 PM)

    Good one. Shows the frustration of aging divinely. Sincerely, Connie Webb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Martha J. Eshelman-Smith (2/11/2006 3:15:00 PM)

    A delightful aphorism. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Cj Heck (12/8/2005 4:29:00 PM)

    This is wonderful, Adrienne! You've just described me, too!
    How hysterical!
    Hugs to you,
    CJ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr. Afaq Qureshi (11/8/2005 2:46:00 AM)

    Its so rare to find someone saying what so many people has always wanted to say but somehow couldnt manage it. Avoidance is one possible explanation and fear of ageing of course compounds the expression. But Ms. Barnathan has excelled and in purely artistic forms have given the perfect account of a natural process with blend of personality to the form.
    Warm regards,
    A.A.Q. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 436 Points Ernestine Northover (10/10/2005 3:20:00 PM)

    You could get in a real state over it couldn't you! Try going to relaxation classes! Sincerely Ernestine Northover (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raynette Eitel (6/23/2005 2:12:00 PM)

    These lines are clever, Adrienne. Just remember that age is only a number (along with a few aches and pains!)

    Raynette (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Shepherd (2/9/2005 6:03:00 AM)

    hey girl yo dissin yo? When two of the brightest poetesses (why does that word give me the creeps, as if Edith Sitwell all in black were creeping up on me?) on this site, of a certain uncertain age, deny their poetic calling, which is to grow old gracefully, gratefully, wisely, and poetically... you young things worry too much.
    State of mind is age. Now that's creepy...but remediable. Trust me, I'm a journalist... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Cj Heck (2/8/2005 7:36:00 PM)

    Adrienne, this is delightful! You've captured exactly how I feel about aging.
    Warm regards,
    CJ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 8, 2005

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 13, 2011


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