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Aldo Kraas

(July 15 1964 / Sao Paulo Brazil)

AKON ANGEL


Akon angel
Is the only black angel that lives in heaven
The rest of the angels are white
And the white angels finally got used to akon angel
Of course the white angels were upset when they heard that a black angel
Was going to live with them
At first they felt outraged
But God had a talk with all the white angels
And told them that their behavior was unacceptable
Because heaven is for everybody and not only for whites
Also God explain to them that he made the people different colors
Because he wanted a spice in life
Akon Angel doesn't have anything against the white angels
But the white angels will ignore Akon angel and not say anything to him
Because they don't want to upset him
So they try topretend that the Akon angel doesn't exist
And that helps them to deal with it
AkonAngel looks after the garden in heaven because he loves to work in The garden and doesn't mind to get dirty
But the white angels don't like the garden at all
And they work inthe kitchen preparing their meals for the day
God is in charge of the laundry and the cleaning of heaven
Also God loves to clean and do the laundry

Submitted: Saturday, January 29, 2011

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  • Colleen Courtney (6/28/2014 9:42:00 PM)

    Hmmm...I was really enchanted and thought this poem was really great. Until I got to the end. There were so many wonderful places you could have taken this yet you ended it with something nonsensical? With the way the majority of the poem read I thought for sure there would be a great ending with a moral lesson at the closing. Big let down with this one! (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (5/9/2014 8:26:00 PM)

    ......akon angel has the best part of the deal....being in the garden would be the best...a great write.... (Report) Reply

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