All Around Poem by arianna loshnowsky

All Around

Rating: 4.7


where ever she goes
all around hatred grows
'you're so annoying'!
they'd cry as her tears are pouring
'i wish you'd dropp dead.'
she hears over and over in her head
and so she cries at night
and as she turns out the light
she prays to the Lord above
'why can't I feel love'?
and as her tears flow
God looks down below
a tear rolls down his cheek
as his child feels so weak
so the little girl sleeps
as her Heavenly Father weeps
and I'm lying here crying
because that little girl is me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Riyam 03 October 2019

That’s a great peom. I really love it

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Tyler Lee 06 August 2009

This poem is outstanding arianna. We need to talk whenever lol. talk to ya soon, And again. Its Good, it has a meaning to me, i feel the emotion in the girls sorrows.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 July 2009

very beautiful n does it reasons true, wonderful rhyming, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Meagan Slack 04 May 2009

haha me again.. you have such a way with words its amazing.. keep posting i love your poems

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Christina Smith 03 April 2009

i like the way you rhyme your words I would say nice poem but the fact that a girl is getting bullied is not nice, but i guess this will happen so...... well done arianna i felt your emotion in that piece of text! ! !

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