sodoko zavaki


Alone Or Not Alone - Poem by sodoko zavaki

I was left in the darkness
Everyone walked around me, taking no notice of me
I cry tears that are not noticed
Blood runs down my arm from the cuts that were made my my knife
I hear someone calling out to me
I look up
I see someone tht stands out of the crowd of strangers
A hand reaches over to me and picks me up
Tears stop and cuts heal
His smile warms my heart
His presents gave me the strength to get myself back on my feet
Strength returns to me and i smile at the sky, grateful to be alive
Im not alone anymore... or maybe i never was


Comments about Alone Or Not Alone by sodoko zavaki

  • Gold Star - 16,998 Points * Sunprincess * (10/14/2012 7:13:00 AM)

    wow this is an awesome poem with great imagery... :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 14,041 Points Lyn Paul (9/26/2012 5:40:00 AM)

    Thank you for this Sodoko. Really we are never alone. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 26, 2012


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