josee dube

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Alone with you I want to be


Alone with you is where I long to be too
Alone together is the place where we should be
Alone without your words
it's you that I miss too

Alone I feel your touch
Alone today just feel like too much
Alone I don't want you to feel
Alone soon I hope you will not be

Alone and it's you I barely know
Alone a while longer and I will come to you
Alone this hunger that makes you ache
Alone this feeling my flesh can't hardly take

Alone this feeling soon you won't have to take
Alone with you I know will be home for me
Alone with you soon will come true
Alone you kiss me goodbye in your mind
Alone but your heart beats with mine

Alone and why is timing so unkind
Because with me, alone you will not find

Fragile how you are, strong and patient you will find
You I need, wait for me and alone you will not be

Submitted: Friday, July 25, 2008
Edited: Friday, July 25, 2008

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Comments about this poem (Alone with you I want to be by josee dube )

  • Rookie Allenika ... (9/4/2009 6:48:00 PM)

    Nice one! a lonely feeling is hard to carry alone. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (7/31/2008 3:23:00 PM)

    love when intense needs the secluded place
    yet being lonely but with love alone..
    luscious green on the rune of colors
    lest be not lost into the reeks of crowd................excellent rave upon the niche of own tune, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (7/25/2008 9:10:00 PM)

    Great start Josee...you have expressed your feelings so well...thanks. (Report) Reply

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