Am I Poem by Doris Cornago

Am I

Rating: 5.0


I
Came
Upon a
Weathered
Wooden grain
Splinty rough
Harsh to touch
Firm grip on bar
Rusty nail speaks
History long gone
Stepping back thru
Steel portal of my
Mind's eye, a piece
Of me withers away
Yet the bar holds
Firm, functional
Steel screwed
Through
Wood
Am
I

For Mark L
Don't mind the wood
Be the screwed on steel

Am I
Friday, March 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,timeless,wooden
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When we share common thoughts on an otherwise nondescript object, we've found friendship. And so it is with poets, who are solitary people but generous with their uncommon poems. I'm blessed to have you all.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nudershada Cabanes 01 April 2018

A perceptive poem well executed.10

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Mark Lambert 31 March 2018

Steel portal of my mind’s eye: This reminds me of both the pursuits of reason and the promise of seeing the world in new ways in the very near future. :) Love it, Doris. Thank you!

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deborrahcornago 31 March 2018

You are the hope of the future, a forward-thinking man; if it so happens that the wood should give way, find a way to pursue reason and keep seeing the future with your Avatar. :)

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Doris Cornago 30 March 2018

I am not my fragile body which weakens and withers away with time; I am my steel mind which is separate from my body, totally and firmly functional. So shall I be till daylight breaks and I am renewed in my resurrection. This is my perception.

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Doris Cornago 30 March 2018

Photo courtesy of Mark Lambert a.k.a.King of the Alley Cats. Says Mark of the poem, that sounds extremely close to how i imagine my existence. Aren't we all just being weathered by time, holding fast to what might be a not so glorious existence?

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