(1955 / Lebanon)

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Ammira Top Model

Your visiting my page
Made my heart dance
Screen at me glances
My age turns teen-age

You're like a nice breeze
To blow in summer heat
The dead's soul his body meets
Keep always blowing please

In vineyard if you pass
Wine could pour as rain
Booze the stones and remains
Wine enough for my glass

Thank your eyes at me wink
My chest up smiles my soul
In nut's shell in deep hole
All around becomes pink

In all places star you are
Joys to life model style
Assign me a little while
When in rest if from far.

Dedicated to Ammira 11/13/2008

Submitted: Thursday, November 13, 2008
Edited: Friday, November 14, 2008


Comments about this poem (Ammira Top Model by kassem oude )

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  • Abdul Athani (9/24/2009 8:03:00 AM)

    so nice poem from i feel young reading it10+++

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  • Anjali Sinha (11/21/2008 9:10:00 PM)

    Ammira the star --the topmodel--- the joy of your life
    hey Ammira cant you see the starrrrrrrrrrs in Kassems eyes
    lovely to read this piece++++10
    regards anjali
    (do read mine No need to say sorry)

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  • Sathyanarayana M V S (11/14/2008 10:55:00 PM)

    Very good rhymes in your poems friend that make them lyrical and beautiful. On this kind of a subject I wrote a couple of poems HER SMILE & A THING OF BEAUTY. This is very good poem. I liked it..........10

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