An Aged: Life Burden Broken Poem by Terence George Craddock

An Aged: Life Burden Broken

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the sweet release of total forgetfulness
the allure of opium eaters lost in no memories
lost in forgetfulness; without the curse

of bending....

will to the wheel for future countless
unknown revolutions; 'we will' chokes
when we can play no more where is

freedom waiting if waiting at all and why
the long or short waits; short or distance
timed journeys into death the final sleep?

vision is gone....

Farewell is so often unexpected?
no sight no sound no memories
slate wiped clean the sweet release


Terence George Craddock (Afterglows Echoes Of Starlight)
Copyright © Terence George Craddock

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Split image from the poem 'Farewell Is So Often So Unexpected? ', by the poet Terence George Craddock. Written in May 2016&2023 on the 14.5.2016&8.5.2023.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 08 May 2023

This reminds me of the final pages of THE DEATH OF IVAN ILYICH, in which the main character (a strong-willed man) begins to lose his faculties, and only then does he face the coming of death with acceptance.

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Terence Craddock 08 May 2023

Smert Ivana Ilyicha by Leo Tolstoy published in 1886. I doubt the local small town library has a copy but I will investigate. I considered myself lucky there were novels by Hermann Hesse and Kahlil Gibran there when I was a teenager.

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