An Emo's Mind Poem by The Marrow

An Emo's Mind

Rating: 5.0


I sit in the dark. A shadow to my sins.
Cuts all over but where does it begin.
The pain falls everywhere but stronger inside,
No one understands so in darkness I hide.
The loneliness enters as the pain melts away
But I still cry to myself. Maybe itll be gone one day.
But my hair still covers what the world doesn’t know.
Feelings of happiness that’ll never show.
My wrist is a canvas. My razor a brush.
Why can I create art with a single touch.
The night calls and when it rains I cry.
No matter how damaged the heart maybe. I wonder why doesn't it die?

Thursday, May 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,emo,life and death,lifestyle,sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
as the title suggests this written from the view point of an emo and its hard life so i just wanted to literate some thoughts i had regarding this
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kay Staley 16 September 2015

Beautiful. Dark and disturbingly realistic, with a heart wrenching perspective that feels so real. My face screws into a mournful look of understanding as I read the words. Great job with the imagery of the cuts, and the comparison of a work of art, with the knife being the brush. How natural and lovely you make something so dark sound. Very easy to relate too; good simple language with such deep feelings behind it. This is by far the best poem I have read on this sight for weeks. Please post more, I will read every word that you say.

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Kieren Adams 07 May 2015

as the title suggests it is regarding the day to day experience of an emo.

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