An Envelope Poem by Joan Woodbridge

An Envelope

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definitive compartment
outsized objects squeezing in
awkward
expose my naked unprolificity

my comparison winces
groping facile half-truths:
Taurus, though fertile
actuates in wordless ungeminicity
takes note
while not responding
awaits Time
not so much the compartment
as the perspective

I am dumb Earth
your words urge wakefulness
heavy with sleep
you rouse me
to sweet uncomplicity

eyes open
half-slits against the wind
bemused
mouth opens..............................
..........................................................
I have no words

Wednesday, December 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: communication,letter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
JOAN WOODBRIDGE 26 May 2020

Jazib, thank you for your kind words about may poem., An Envilope. I have read your poem Love and several times and enjoyed it very much. Your work is truthful sndvery clever. I like very much that you keep your sense humor even with such a serious subject. And, in the end you don't throw out completely but relegate it to its rightful secondary place. Thank you. Joan Woodbridge

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 May 2020

A refined poetic imagination, Joan Woodbridge. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Joan Woodbridge 26 May 2020

I have read your poem several times and have enjoyed it immensely. It is thoughtful, truthful, and very clever. You keep your sense of humor even with this serious subject, and in the end you do not throw complete; y away, but give it its rightful secondary place. Ewell done, Jazib

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