(13 November 1991 / Katima Mulilo, Namibia)

What do you think this poem is about?

and so we danced

And so we danced in the dark
with every kiss another spark
and so we danced with no song
But we danced for so long
through summer, spring, winter, fall
thats when we are at the ball
and so we danced no end in sight
with every step i get might
with two left feet i step to her beat
as i tread on her feet
and so we danced hand in hand
and so we danced 'the end'

Submitted: Friday, March 13, 2009


Comments about this poem (and so we danced by Adens Kamwi )

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  • Bryan Alexander (8/26/2009 3:31:00 PM)

    apperently you are a better poet than a dancer. very good poem

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  • Catrina Heart (3/18/2009 10:28:00 AM)

    great poem woven with fine diction and penned in eloquence....10

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  • Anjell Bryan (3/17/2009 5:38:00 PM)

    this is really romantic..nice job.

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  • Aldo Kraas (3/15/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    That poem is
    Excelent

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