Angels In Flight Poem by Broken Nd Alone

Angels In Flight

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Floating high above all things,
heavens near I`ve found my wings.
All inhibitations now seem tame,
nd life will never be the same.
Love is something tht I`ve found,
which feels so different on the ground.
Broken glass like shatterd dreams,
feel so hopless or so it seems.
I sat there waiting for the fall,
it was my heart tht made the call.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 23 July 2008

nice one, wonderful rhyme there and good message put across

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Tai Chi Italy 23 July 2008

this is a beautiful expresion of what loves gives us my friend, to make it perfect a little edit on the typos would do it. Smiling at you, welcome to the broken crew, but please remember, you are never alone, this is the broken hearts of poets home. Smiling at you, Tai

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