When light so divine,
Reveals a view truly mild;
Lives nature's design.
Birds, on trees that twine,
As well as other beasts wild,
Behold a world so fine.
If smog was to dine
On life, nature will be piled
In a world to pine.
If love on the line
Is let so, peace will be filed
To make the world shine.
i can see your pattern here... if you want me to make a poem and apply a pattern like this.... as of now(February 7,2010) you just can't make me do it... it's hard! nice job! thumbs up!
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‘When light so divine, /Reveals a view truly mild; /Lives nature's design.’ Sparkling take off… soooooo nice…enjoyed ‘Design’ wow! ! Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK