Appreciated Poem by Luo Zhihai

Appreciated

Appreciated

Cuckoos cried to break the moon in the spring evening
Willows touched flat the waves of the summer water
I laid in the pine mountain to listen to cry of the cranes drunkenly
I enjoyed the warbler song in the bamboo garden leisurely

欣赏

杜鹃啼破春宵月
杨柳拂平夏水波
醉卧松山听鹤唳
闲栖竹苑品莺歌


3/29/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9773首对联体诗
The 9,773th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内有几十位诗人参与创作。

Sunday, March 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: evening,lie,moon,mountain,pine,song,spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2020

Cuckoos cried to break the moon in the spring evening. The imagery is brilliantly expressed in wonderful thought.

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Douglas Scotney 29 March 2020

I like the idea of a broken moon. 'lied' is wrong - should be 'lay'

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Luo Zhihai

Luo Zhihai

Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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