Are You Confused? Poem by Anna Cellmer

Are You Confused?

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Are you confused over me, dear?
I know you want to be the right man still
But what to do with the situation like this
When the woman wants you and miss
And the way which means 'proper'
Can be just a great disappointment to her?
It's kind of trap I know but
You didn’t know that you find on your way
19 years old virgin anyway who dreamt
About the man as you are
So, now you see what can be
With the little girl I use to be still
I’m a bit older now
And much more open for you but
This what I try to do
Doesn’t sound right to you
But from the other hand
How to refuse such a offer?
I know that you don’t know
What to do with me now
My love, but I just have a hope that
You don’t charge me too hard
And that you know I’m real to you
In everything I say and I'm asking for

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philip Housiaux 16 April 2008

Very strong personal poem - not fully explained (presumably deliberately to symbolise the privacy of someone elses private lives?) but clear hints of marital breakdown, the very much younger woman, personal strength of the older woman? Anyway it clearly spoke to me so it is effective. Very good work

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Philip Housiaux 16 April 2008

Very strong personal poem - not fully explained (presumably deliberately to symbolise the privacy of someone elses private lives?) but clear hints of marital breakdown, the very much younger woman, personal strength of the older woman? Anyway it clearly spoke to me so it is effective. Very good work

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Anna Cellmer

Anna Cellmer

Olsztyn, Poland
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