LaSoaphia QuXazs

Rookie - 2 Points (1934 / Budapest, Hungary, living in the USA)

Are You With Me? - Poem by LaSoaphia QuXazs

If you listen to the old wise men,
You are on the front when the race is over, so listen,
If you want to find true happiness forever,
Open your mind and block out the deceiver.

If you want to know the truth for all time,
Go back and search for my messages and my rhyme.
If it was meant for you, you'll learn,
You'll find answers for all that what after you yearn.

Health, Wealth & true Happiness can be yours for free,
When you loose the ego, the will and you stop disagree.
Humble, easy going, kind and laughing,
Faith in goodness all the way, your life'll be only upswing.

But, watch it, it do not happen as the world teaches,
You'll be aware of your own experiences,
You'll face challenges easily and happily,
Life'll become an adventure for all eternity.


Comments about Are You With Me? by LaSoaphia QuXazs

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (7/4/2013 4:45:00 PM)

    a good write. enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 534 Points Yasmeen Khan (7/1/2013 1:36:00 AM)

    You are right ego and self-conceitedness cause unhappiness and loneliness. I picked the line: Faith in goodness all the way, your life'll be only upswing. as my favourite. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,433 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (12/10/2012 7:46:00 AM)

    Each line of yors here is exactly what i wish to say to atheists and people who dont believe in God. Only in God do i discover contentment and readin u im glad u r a like godly mind. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/17/2012 10:51:00 PM)

    open your mind...keep at bay the DECEIVER-----i find this line really meaningful/happiness is within.a state of mind (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 17, 2012



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