As The Sun Rises Poem by Ivan Ramirez N

As The Sun Rises

Rating: 5.0


As the sun rises,
my sadness demises,
i feel the sand on my feet,
as soft as my bedsheet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nasarudheen Parameswaran 19 August 2010

A simple song so bright as the rising sun.Congratulations.

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Frank Odindo 06 August 2010

wow Ivan how beautiful and cute. Well done.

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Ivan Ramirez N

Ivan Ramirez N

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