As The Sun Sets Poem by Doris Cornago

As The Sun Sets

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Minds lock, focused on a wish
Breeze comes as the sun sets
Carrying you to my open patio
Resplendent in silver, not a quiver

You stretch out your wings for me
And I climb up not looking downward
Gingerly circle your neck with my legs
And my arms, feeling your chest throb

You carry me slowly across treetops
Feathers warm my face, filter the wind
You are precise as you brace for the spot
Your legs uncurl like the wheels on a plane
Perfect landing spot to pass the cool night

As The Sun Sets
Friday, August 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: ethereal
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
No words can exactly describe a woman's first sexual experience but this is one woman's description of how lovemaking feels for the first time. I like to picture the bliss of the moment in ethereal imagery to capture the beauty of the act.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doris Cornago 04 August 2017

Lovemaking is set to classical music, with crescendo and diminuendo, not rock music which shatters the soul.

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