Theorem The Truth Serum

Rookie - 171 Points (1979-present / San Leandro)

Asian Girl - Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

Dark eyes accented by black hair,
she is an Asian girl
that happens to be
one of the most beautiful females
that has ever been seen by these eyes
It took two steps for my heart to explode.


Comments about Asian Girl by Theorem The Truth Serum

  • Rookie BEAU GOLDEN (6/24/2006 4:17:00 AM)

    adding this to my favrites (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie William Jackson (5/7/2006 11:35:00 PM)

    I understand the Asian girl fancy completely! Nice poem. She sounds lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madcorporatelawyer . (9/21/2005 12:23:00 PM)

    i really like the way your poem ends (dont understand the whole asian girl fancy, but to each his own i guess) . this may seem a rather strange comment, but have you by any chance seen kill bill? =)

    cheers,

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 8, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, October 31, 2011


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