At Night Poem by Ian Keenan

At Night

Rating: 3.8


Since my day began
I have been searching for the gold
hidden in the chinks
between rocks.

I have been digging
in many places
and ways,
but at the slightest touch
the rocks shift
and my sight is blocked;
my hands are bloody,
and my day is old,
its strength ebbing in the shadows.

At night dreams
drop and lift me,
making and breaking up
the crowds
of which I have dreamt
so many times,
of men and women
and their small affections.

Wednesday, January 6, 2016
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Khairul Ahsan 11 April 2016

I like the picture you've drawn in this poem. The picture looks familiar to me. Loved these lines: 'and my day is old, its strength ebbing in the shadows' - and the last stanza in full.

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