At Rest In The Snow Poem by Matthew Densley

At Rest In The Snow

Rating: 4.7


I punish myself, for what? I don't know
My body lies quivering, at rest in the snow
But I don't feel the cold, it's strange, but it's true
There's something much deeper that is making me blue
A lonesome life in a crowded place
Wipes all expression off of my face
The voice in my head is screaming, so loud
But to share it with others? I think I'm too proud
Depressive thoughts are clouding my brain
My own loneliness is the source of my pain
Some kind of direction? Maybe that's what I need
But the maps are all blank and there's no signs to read
I'm waiting for someone to show me the way
But who's gonna find me? I feel like a stray
So I'll stay and I'll wait - for what? I don't know
My body still quivering, at rest in the snow






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Tuesday, October 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 07 January 2011

This is a lovely poem. I did not think it about depression so much as enforced aloneness per se. Read mine: Saturday Moraning Mood Adeline

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Sabrina Perry 29 October 2009

you were spot on with this poem... there are so many times i feel this way but all you can do is push through it knowing that it has to get harder before it gets easier.. amazing.10

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Matthew Densley 25 September 2009

Ah thankyou for pointing them out, I have changed them now. Theres probily many spelling mistakes in my earlier work, its just from where I was rushing to type them up from the handwriten copies. Cheers. -Matt-

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Jean Dament 25 September 2009

You described your feelings of depression well in this neat poem. Nicely done. A few errors: 'mypain'-should be 'my pain' & 'lonleyness'-should be 'loneliness' ok I have two poems about depression, 'Out of Darkness' & 'Rainbows' End' if you care to read them & review also. Ravensong

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