Autumn Poem by Mayjorey Dellosa Buendia

Autumn



Autumn wind is blowin
Trust leaves are fallin
Patience start losin
Anger then arisin

Leaves on the ground
Fall on the ground
Heart on the ground
Pride on the ground

There’s no rain today
Even sunshine is faraway
Enjoyin the cool, lonely breeze
Fed up from summer frizz

Leaves fallin
Love’s failin
Arguments sure hurt
When vulnerability hits the heart

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'When VULNERABILITY hits the heart' …we tend to become sensitive with everything in contrast with our ideas/decisions, and thats B-A-D…i know.

It’s not really a good feeling bein vulnerable when argument arises so i tend to shutdown to repair myself. Yeah i’m bein selfish on runnin away from problems but i guess it will do us good in the long run since i/we have time to figure things out then work on improvin them before talkin…than facin someone upfront then exchange hate words that stings coz i tend to become a mean bitch but i don’t want to, you see, the idea of hurtin anyone freaks me out *sigh*.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 March 2010

Leaves fallin Love’s failin Arguments sure hurt When vulnerability hits the heart. this how reality in life works. fortunates are those who get and enjoy it. otherwise there is always pain and agony.. beautiful write my dear.. fine one and i liked it......10 read mine... i miss... mary to marry.. miss i miss you... come home

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