Be Strong Poem by Christopher Leone

Be Strong

Rating: 4.5


to much to give in
to hard to break down
people live to stay strong
give up to give frown
why fall to the bottom
watching others rise to the top
fight hard till the end
don't stop till you drop

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Serenity Prayer 28 May 2008

good poem. i totally agree.

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Seema Chowdhury 28 May 2008

a very sweet and encouraging poem. we must not stop till we are dead, a very good motto.

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 May 2008

relentless effort till the end, , , like it

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Clarissa Tobey 29 May 2008

i think you are a good write so far lets see about the rest i don't really read many poems by random people but i have enjoyed this one.

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wow i like it good job....come check out my poems and tell me your input...thx again Chris Jessica Elizondo

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Coreena Dejesus 17 June 2008

very good Chris. Thanks for sharing.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 06 June 2008

Hello poet some great tywists in this ppoem, thoughtful good read. Have you read my poem 'I Must Be Strong? ' Please take a look. Thanks, Loyd

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Csdb Kind 31 May 2008

show the world its true by doing

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Tamer Mymind 31 May 2008

hey chris u are so talented man and its a great idea to write abt this topic keep it up ;)

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Ashley Burnam 31 May 2008

Hey there. This is kinda good. Im not sure if I like the fourth line but i like the message this poem sends. Keep up the good work. Keep writing.

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