Anoop Lokkur

Rookie (22/01/1985 / Bangalore)

Beautiful Little Stranger - Poem by Anoop Lokkur

As I walked down the steps,
my eyes caught your innocence.
The moisture on your lips
inviting to be kissed.

Your firm suple breast
could not make me rest;
And as you walked towards me
all I wanted was us to be alone.

As I see you bid farewell,
I wish to see you again.
But in my mind you shall remain forever
as my beautiful little stranger


Comments about Beautiful Little Stranger by Anoop Lokkur

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (10/7/2006 7:03:00 PM)

    Anoop, this a whimsical little poem. It has sincerity and warmth and some beautiful images particularly 'my eyes caught your innocence' - and the last line added depth to the essentially descriptive nature of the piece. Warmly Alison (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Daniel Tyler (10/7/2006 4:00:00 PM)

    the best of your collection. Beautiful flow and word selection.
    But in my mind you shall remain forever
    as my beautiful little stranger

    Stunning. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Nimal Dunuhinga (10/7/2006 2:36:00 PM)

    Very beautiful Anoop! A little stranger can do lot of changes in your life?
    Take care. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R H (10/7/2006 7:26:00 AM)

    I like the images you have created here - great ending to this too. Justine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Your Sword Vs My Pen (10/7/2006 7:24:00 AM)

    Ive felt this way many times, you've expressed my feelings well!
    Great poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 7, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 13, 2010


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