Vidi Writes

Rookie - 5 Points (India)

Beauty - Poem by Vidi Writes


It’s the wish of one and all in their lifetime
To look beautiful and behave clever.
To hear the eulogize of one self is to bloom
Equal to hearing a zooming river.

All are not fortunate
To possess the blonde skin
Beauty in curves and cuteness as feat
But to be heard as ‘lovely’, is the yearn

There is strength in beauty
Power in being handsome
Life offers splendid scope in plenty
Even at the cost of some being loathsome

It’s amazing to be beautiful
When mixed with goodness it’s splendid
Deficits and limitations are acceptable
As long as the beauty mesmerizes mankind

Beauty has become the concept of markets
All ready to pour currency into it
Those shows worth not loosing the pockets
Appeals when it comes by nature’s gift.

Physical charm tends to perish along with age
Beauty of manners, survive till the end
Still, beauty is the measure of ones image
Perception doesn’t change in this showy trend

One who is intellectual always looks inside
Rates oneself through ones wisdom paradise
Evaluate the self and enjoy with pride
Beauty within oneself is for all to realize.


Comments about Beauty by Vidi Writes

  • Freshman - 569 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (6/7/2009 5:35:00 AM)

    One who is intellectual always looks inside
    Rates oneself through ones wisdom paradise
    Evaluate the self and enjoy with pride
    Beauty within oneself is for all to is simply truth of beauty and beauty by truth, wonderful write ingenious by imagery, even luscious glow lays attracting,10+++, thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Raj Nandy (1/12/2009 10:40:00 PM)

    BEAUTY lies in the eyes of the beholder! It takes an intellectual mind to delve
    and find, true beauty of a perennial kind, - true beauty of the heart and mind!
    (Lines dedicated to dear Vidi!) For your poem 10!
    - RAJ NANDY (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (1/5/2009 5:10:00 AM)

    the final lines said it all- the beauty within would'nt go with age-lovely subject-10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (10/6/2008 8:10:00 AM)

    the spiritual side, exemplified through these fines words
    definitely bring out the best in others (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Reetesh Sabr (9/28/2008 11:31:00 AM)

    quite well written...and distinction explained (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,022 Points Indira Renganathan (9/28/2008 1:57:00 AM)

    I like the last line with a moral beauty..good poem..kindly read mine 'beauty branded' when time permits..thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (9/16/2008 2:32:00 AM)

    Nice way of expressing beauty in a poetic form. This attribute was shown from different and modern point of view. I love it and added 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Vidyadhara ..... (5/16/2008 8:02:00 AM)

    This is the true amalgamation of beauty and brains........SE and poetry at its best.good one vidi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Gregory Collins (4/18/2008 4:22:00 AM)

    a zooming river mesmerizes mankind, you said it, beautiful, womankind too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Janri Gogeshvili (4/8/2008 2:07:00 AM)

    About beauty many wrote, but your beauty in it, that so is gentle, so is original and attractively present the feelings and sights-10 … (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 86 Points Aasiq the poet (4/2/2008 1:34:00 AM)

    excellent musings on beauty and vanity that too in rhymes.
    thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 4, 2009

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