Because We Feel In Love Poem by Ma.Emmariz Valmorida
Because We Feel In Love
Oh! Happiness can't be measure,
If we really feel in love and we adore.
To a person special for us,
On the first blind date, time run so fast.
Cannot sleep, night is always a day,
Thinking to someone who feels us glee.
Is it because we feel in love,
Which a gifts from above.
When two persons bind with a dove,
Misunderstanding and argue boil in a vast.
Is it because we feel in love,
Relationship never last.
Respect, honor arose within us,
Where it shows if we feel in love.
Hoping everyone feel the same,
So that happiness is not just a dream.
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5/6/2024 1:08:48 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I see the hand of a great poet in this piece. You are able to manipulate those few words into what could make a story- for a good story writer though. However, I think your strength lies more in the meaning of this poem than in the form, whereas a poem is a poem simply because it is expressed in a condensed and precise and sweetened language. You've done a great job with the poem, Ma.Emmariz and I got the message; but you don't pay more attention to the style. Remember, what makes a poem beautiful is the how; in fact, it is through the beauty of the how that the meaning is mostly realised. How I wish I could help you refine some lines in this poem of yours. Well, if I had my ways, you might have something like this for the first stanza: Oh! immeasurable happiness! If truly love be our aim To that special person whom we adore Then on our blind date Time is as life Well, I just want you to know that I'm always sincere with people's works when I help them out. I think I shouldn't have bothered on us. Or should I?