Morning rays
Light up the brilliance
of diamond jewels,
As it moves, draped
in diaphnous robes.
Curvaceous, heaving
Its bosom like a siren,
A wanton woman,
Trying to ensnare
A gullible victim,
Paying standing ovation,
With longing in his limpid eyes,
Watching from the sidelines.
Comely, willowy
Gracefully undulating,
Today rain or shine
It flows,
With determination
Enjoying the journey;
On its destination
To merge its identity
With the one
who has waited
an eternity;
the mighty ocean.
a good imagery using the glittering river and ocean...tantalising womanhood in ultimate 'confluence' with manhood...good imaginative write, enigmatic though 10
There is music, rhythm, color and paint in this poetic composition! Why not try also short stories to unburden your poetic vision? ! 10/10 -Raj Nandy
New ammmmazing taste have got from this one. chosen words are fine! ........10+
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A journey, towards destination, on the way... with diverse... A beautiful poem.10 for it.