Birds(10 Short Poems) Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Birds(10 Short Poems)

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Birds {10 short poems}

Oh, you little birds;
Happy to see you in your nest, so pretty,
so nice clinging to your mother’s breast

Wish my castle
Be like your nest where
God always rests

Wish to speak to you
In softest words, don’t shy away
As it pains me all the way

In a day, you will fly away
Sweet birds, up in the sky a happy fly
Not known to me your way

Only your songs
Treasured in my memory will
Chase you wherever you go and stay

Clear and blue is the sky
Grasses green and trees in leafage anew
You seem happy singing all day through

Such is the power of your
Liquid notes melting down darkness
Into dawn to greet the day-king at morn

Carry live orchestra on wings
Deliver priceless melodies at will, so tender
And serene that attract all to your ring

Always happy, through field
And forest you fly to where you care
Trilling your gratefulness to earth and sky you share

Oh, birds, tell me your secrets
Of happiness that I long for ever
Or carry me on your wings to Heaven
Where happiness flows ever and ever.......

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem on birds.........
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 21 July 2014

its so philosophical.....................nice....like it

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Denis Mair 19 May 2016

By lyrical perception we know that living things join in the unfolding of time: SUCH IS THE POWER OF YOUR/ LIQUID NOTES MELTING DOWN DARKNESS/ INTO DAWN... By lyrical imagination, one realm of experience merges with another: CARRY LIVE ORCHESTRA ON WINGS/ DELIVER PRICELESS MELODIES... By lyrical expansiveness, we reach out in spirit to other creatures: CARRY ME ON YOUR WINGS TO HEAVEN/ WHERE HAPPINESS FLOWS EVER AND EVER...

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 04 October 2015

Oh, birds, tell me your secrets Of happiness that I long for ever Or carry me on your wings to Heaven Where happiness flows ever and ever....... Verily, a lovely poem, Loved reading it......10

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Many many thanks......Aralimattiji......I am humbled........

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Chinedu Dike 01 August 2021

Beautiful piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched...

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LeBron James 21 January 2020

whats up laker gang!

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LeBron James 21 January 2020

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 December 2018

Of all living things, there's something about birds that never fail to move mankind, especially a poetic mind. The power of your liquid verse I think matches with the power of bird's liquid notes, as you said. A lovely poem.

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2018

Great poems on Birds, I agree with Rajnish Ji's comments.

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Many many thanks.......Asim Nehalji......I am truly humbled

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