A tear that falls a scream that cries.
A smile thats false and a hidden lie.
A broken heart a laugh thats fake.
A secret lost a promise that'll break.
Why is everything so filled with sorrow.
Forget yesterday live for tommorow.
Cause thats all that matters is the day ahead.
Just keep waiting for your black heart to beat red
A tear that falls a scream that cries. A smile thats false and a hidden lie. A broken heart a laugh thats fake. very good lines. good job. Becca
Another fine piece of poetry. Keep writing my friend, seems you have a gift! Regards, Leria
I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT....I'D HAVE TO AGREE WITH STEPHANIE....I WOULD NEVER BE ABLE TO WRITE AS GOOD AS YOU! YOUR WONDERFUL! ! .....AND I LOVE! HOW YOU WRITE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! EXCELLENT WORK! ! ! I GIVE IT A TEN! ! THE RYTHM IS PRACTICALLY COMING TO ME! ! IT'S GREAT! ! !
wow! when i was 12 i never wrote like that! when you're my age you'll be a genius :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
that was pretty -ryan