Black Sheep... Poem by Onyx Blake

Black Sheep...

Rating: 3.5


In my families eyes i am a fool...
Never did well in school...
I might as well be gool...
In a bloody pool of their hearts...
I am like bits of parts in their minds...
ugly, stupid, nasty, weak...
my consequinces with them are so deep...
Its like climbing up mount everest, sio vast and steep...
with my family i am like a black sheep...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angelic Warrior 18 June 2009

that really sucks...and i feel the same way...only i'm worse i put on a show for my family to try to seem like i fit in but i don't feel like i do....they only congratulate me for the things i'm not proud of.....life sucks 10

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Onyx Davis 01 December 2008

i'm defintely gonna read more of your poetry

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Stephanie Dower 12 October 2008

I can totally relate to some of this. Great poem, thanks for sharing!

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Onyx Blake

Onyx Blake

Chicago, Ilinois, USA
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