Charles Jagongo

Rookie - 380 Points (1972 / Kenya, Africa)

Bloody Banana Leaf, Confirmation! - Poem by Charles Jagongo

They had brought her here, would sing and dance
Her peers would add wood to fire
A night so divine, a wedding of time
A wedding mark in space bound for
White linen sheets spread, the banana leaves ready
She timid and anxious, womanhood journey begins
In his closet
Warrior in him, anxiety concealed
Outside they would sing
He would grab her, a beauty so delicate, a virgin so pretty
They would sing and drums beat, a night in hearts would stick
She would submit to him, her world, where none had walked
In crescendo blood would get away, she would moan
In delight she would pull and wrap blood in the banana leaf
Her trophy, the bloody banana leaf
Confirmation stamp, virginity preserved for show!
Happily after they would count moons and sunsets.


Comments about Bloody Banana Leaf, Confirmation! by Charles Jagongo

  • Silver Star - 3,461 Points Nyota Yasulwe (8/12/2015 12:43:00 AM)

    Culture displayed here in a poetic way! Keep writing. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 184 Points Brian Jani (6/23/2014 4:15:00 PM)

    What an unusual poem, that's in a good way i enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,957 Points * Sunprincess * (9/11/2012 8:23:00 AM)

    interesting write...didn't see this one coming.. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 8, 2012



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