Bloody Shore Poem by Bohari Mohammad

Bloody Shore

Rating: 5.0


Sitting near the sea, holding a lamp
Waiting for my love with a lonely stamp
She went apart with a lie
Just ignoring the tears in my eye!

The sun is getting down with the face red
I am lying on the bay with my soul dead
I lie on the shore and mixed with the clay
Sinking down, below the bay..! ! !

I just woke up and found myself alone
Screamed ‘I love you' with a skeleton
In sighing I took a step and took a dip
My hands came with the heart to show I quit..! ! !

Thursday, June 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When I got the news that my love faked me and went apart with her
boy friend....I wrote this poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patel Simran 19 June 2014

One of the best poems I've ever heard! Really great job! If 30 out of 10 was possible, that's what I'd give you!

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John Sam 19 June 2014

Excellent poem composed by you The love you have is clearly seen from your poem Thanks for posting

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