Breaking Me Down Poem by Timothy Hector
Breaking Me Down
You brought me down, broke all my walls
all my worries seemed so small
because when you are near
i forget all my fears
friends are suppose to help each other
so why should i have to cover
all the things i feel for you
when i'm sure you feel it to
life is a mess, or so they say
i will be glad when i find the day
thats everything makes sense to me
my head is a mess, literally
i open up bit, by bit
the words sit on the edge of, my lips
i just cant bring myself to say
all the things that made me this way
but slowly i'll make it there
to that point, at which is where
you will know everything there is
about my life, through what i've lived
but in return i ask one thing
for you to do the same for me
open up whats inside
from me you dont have to hide
what it is you think or feel
i need to know that this is real
that this isnt just all one way
because that is not how i play
I'll put my trust in you
what else can i do
your like no-one i've ever met
a friend i will never forget
i open up bit, by bit the words sit on the edge of, my lips 'i just cant bring myself to say all the things that made me this way but slowly i'll make it there to that point, at which is where you will know everything there is about my life, through what i've lived' I have been struggling to so all these, you know just letting it out and i think you took the words right out of my mouth... Thank you...its a beautiful poem
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5/5/2024 5:35:14 AM # 1.0.0.1119
i get the feeling that most of things you write about are about one person.. and its like a struggle to stay on the same page, you alwayss open up but the other person won't/can't it must be tough. stick in there they will open up soon, hopefully. you are an amazing poet, your rhyming is brilliant and the form is awesome.