Broken Poem by lyle hertenstein

Broken

Rating: 5.0


Shattered pecies of what remains
Look at what we had
I told you I would never hurt you in all honesty of my heart
To bad you didn't say the same

You said you where the one with the trust issues
Yet we have all been hurt
Trust for you is nothing
My hands covered my face to fight back all emotions
When I heard
You expected me to believe you when I knew
You lied

Sorry must be the key to your life
Well not mine
One word will change nothing anymore
Now im breathing heavy on the floor
Ripping the heart of my sleeve
Its cliche I know
But baby its the price you pay

Things will never be the same now
Feelings comming and going
Never knowing
If there real this time
This time I want to believe you
I want to be able to trust you
But fear of a broken heart is my one true phobiea

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karlee O 03 November 2008

Lyle, It's Karlee I've Got To Say This Is BEAUTIFUL... Not Only Are You A Good Artist, But You Rock At This Too..(: I'm Not Sure, But I Have This Big Guess On Who This Is About Chance's Are Im Not Right..(:

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Alayna Bullock 02 November 2008

I think this one is my favorite :) I wishes i knew who it is about.. Lol. :) Im a nosey goose! : D

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Jennifer Spurlock 29 October 2008

heyy lyle.. who dis about? ? well i suppose ill ttyl... peace

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Kesav Easwaran 29 October 2008

broken love feelings well compiled...the poem talks frank and bold through well framed lines...good piece, lyle...10

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