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Love was on the air,
when we walked hands in hands,
around the beach of Legian,
our feet covered with sands.
The day first you woke me up,
with a cup of cappuchino,
and an orchid on the other,
stolen from the garden of Mrs. Kimono.
The beautiful rays of the moonlight,
when focused upon the terrace,
upon my cheeks you kissed,
and I was completely blessed.
Now months passed away,
but you not relate to me,
rang you up a thousands,
that's all happened to be.
I grieved, I cried,
all around I wandered.
Ran to your house, but,
you didn't bother.
Know not the reason why,
u treated me this way,
the faith all I had,
u shattered up away.
Priyanka Bhowmick
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rago rago
(7/2/2009 4:59:00 AM) |
let not others break our hearts........your poem is fine and well penned. My 'Reminiscience' is the work.my travel from Guwahati to Shillong the nature and the way I travelled is a real reminiscience. My poem is short as I curtailed many a thing. ....... I dedicate it to your Assam State from heart. I do not want to put it in PH to publish........
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Sathyanarayana M V S
(6/15/2009 7:34:00 AM) |
Priya! To be frank I read a no. of poems on broken-heart, broken faith etc. especially written by women poets. As Kesavji wrote love is a funny game, in which always the man cheats to win. Women are always at the receiving end. I am so sorry for all those innocent feminine hearts who fall prey to crooked men.
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Kesav Easwaran
(5/31/2009 1:45:00 AM) |
love is a funny game...it beats you all out often at the winning post you unaware...
good poem Priyanka...good flowing words...good presentation...thanks...10
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar
(5/28/2009 1:47:00 AM) |
Though it is not explicit as to whom- man or woman- it is addressed, it is more coman for man writing such one. here the writer is not man. yet expression is authentic, rich in anotation. nice, shan
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