Broken Heart Poem by Laya Bajpai

Broken Heart

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When the heart is broken
What are you left with?
A cauldron of emotions
Memories that ever so softly
Keep touching you
You wish to break away from the past
And start afresh, anew
but that is the hardest part
Memories of tender moments
keep brushing by you
leaving you aching with longing.
Emotions torment you
You are unable to find a respite
Mind roars with thoughts
They keep lashing against each other
like waves crashing against the wall
to make borders and control the turbulent ocean
Your whole body seems to have become turbulence itself
Mind, heart, body everything rings with raging emotions
You look for escape
Peace from this smoldering volcano
But alas! there is no peace to be had
I think only time will tell
Whether you can move on or
Remain rooted to a spot
Time is the best healer
Only time will tell

Thursday, August 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,heart,love,peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 16 November 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. An insightful depiction of the intricacies of heartbreak. Thanks for sharing.

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Laya Bajpai 16 November 2019

Thanks for reading and appreciating. Your comments inspire me.

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 September 2019

Very impressive write, Laya Bajpai. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Laya Bajpai 08 September 2019

Thank you. I shall surely look over your poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 August 2019

Your whole body seems to have become turbulence itself Mind, heart, body everything rings with raging emotions You look for escape Peace from this smoldering volcano But alas! there is no peace to be had............//// wonderfully written; love this expression

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Laya Bajpai 30 August 2019

Thanks Mahtab! !

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Gajanan Mishra 29 August 2019

Start afresh, start a new

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