Burning In Love Was I Bright Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Burning In Love Was I Bright

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What a storming flight
Oh this love turned out to be!
Burning was I bright,
And she poured water on me;
Making smoke of me
That blew me up to my plight,
Down when breeze brought me.

And not in her heart,
Far and quite apart,
Pedestal where she put me,
A bust of fine art,
Alive, a ghost out of me!
What a storming flight
Oh this love turned out to be!
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Musings | 46.02.2019 |

Wednesday, February 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I recall vaguely an Urdu Ghazal whose words I faintly remember.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 February 2019

Breeze of love brought up has given a light of new growth. Becoming very bright is fortune. An excellent poem is well penned.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 February 2019

As I said, your interpretation of a poem is always unique, Kumarmani Mahakul. Thank you so much.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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