I think we all have had that feeling of flitting butterflies in the belly. Unfortunately this poem didn't give me this feeling! Why not have added why or what caused you to have that fluttery feeling? This poem, if it is a poem, really doesn't convey anything to the reader.
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I think we all have had that feeling of flitting butterflies in the belly. Unfortunately this poem didn't give me this feeling! Why not have added why or what caused you to have that fluttery feeling? This poem, if it is a poem, really doesn't convey anything to the reader.