Can'T Think, How To Call This Poem by Victor Ogoti

Can'T Think, How To Call This

Rating: 4.5


Uh-hmm its so sweet so nice
It smothers soul, it clouds my eyes
I want not lose and neither to mess
an inch of fiber that makes its strings

good it is, defies the wise
from you to I and I likewise
a dot of mark, to not erase
in bold engraved at heart it stays

Oh beloved I want not less
this sweetness within I want all ways
but afraid am I, to mess in days
let's just be... lets be just allies

and I just cant think, how to call this

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Carse 27 January 2012

Thank you for your kind words. I really liked this. Very concise and precise, the way poems should be. Well done and kind regards.

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success