Can U Be My Friend Poem by who cares im in love and its not with u

Can U Be My Friend

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so confused
in so many ways
makes u wonder
how u pass the day
wanting to talk
yet so afraid
of the hurt
the rejection
the pain
u ask so many people
can u be my friend
to help the troubled
the lost and the sane
yet they laugh and walk away
3 days go by
still so confused
u walk through town
thinking of ur blues
when u see the child crying
u want to help but not sure how
u listen to her
and all she asks is...
can u be my friend

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ari Ryan 14 February 2011

I really liked this poem, very true no doubt. Maybe check out some of my work? Thanks for the read :)

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Gerard Parks 09 February 2011

This is nice and very true for all of us. we all call for help. but others just walk away

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Shihabudheen K J 20 January 2011

nice poem.keep good work.nice imagine

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Rohan Roy 10 November 2010

wow nice 1..loved it..by why just one poem? ? u have da capibilty of writting many beautiful poems..keep writting more and tell me ok..: -)

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Danny ~REBELCHILD~ McGinnis 03 November 2010

this is a good poem i like it alot: -) good work

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