Can We Make It Through This? Poem by Crazy Vampire

Can We Make It Through This?

Rating: 4.8


you say you love me, but you cant stand some of my traits
i dont understand why you love me, when you should hate
its impossible for us to agree
and yet i love you, and you still love me

on life i have a pessimistic view
you dont like it, but you dont know the pain i go through
everyday wondering what will come
you say i have been running, but the question is, what from?

you say let go of my past
you tell me that my pain and suffering will not last
what will become of us? are we meant to be? are we fate?
can we save our love? or is it too late?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iron Panda 23™ 01 June 2010

: o niiiiicccceeeeee

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Kayla B Mitchell 12 June 2010

i like the both sides of the poem, his and yours very nice (great poem)

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Christopher Ebenezer 04 June 2010

this is a very cool and artistic poem. keep more comming

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Cleide Tatyana Almeida 03 June 2010

I think this is a great poem. It's easy for most people to relate to, especially the second verse: it's so easy for people to assume you're okay when they see you smiling on the outside, when you're dying on the inside. Check out my poems 'I hate' and 'Imagine' I'm sure you'll relate. Poet name: Tatyana 'Churlish Cherub' Almeida.

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Cleide Tatyana Almeida 03 June 2010

I think this is a great poem. It's easy for most people to relate to, especially the second verse: it's so easy for people to assume you're okay when they see you smiling on the outside, when you're dying on the inside. Check out my poems 'I hate' and 'Imagine' I'm sure you'll relate. Poet name: Tatyana 'Churlish Cherub' Almeida.

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Elias Barcelona 02 June 2010

wow i like this one love and hate are sometimes intwined

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Crazy Vampire

Hemet, California
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