Cannot See Poem by Kewayne Wadley

Cannot See

Rating: 5.0


The world is but a flame
burning on top the wick of a candle
In uncontrolled chaos.
Eventually it swallows the wick
It's scent the flavor between
you & I
The world is but a puzzle
broken into a million pieces
stacked on top of each other.
Eventually this flame
will burn out
& all of the pieces will scatter.
& when it does
I'll finally admit
that I am lost without you
Surrounded in nothing but dark.
A moth bumping into everything
it cannot see-

Cannot See
Tuesday, September 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness,love,random thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 08 September 2020

Eventually this flame will burn out & all of the pieces will scatter. & when it does I'll finally admit that I am lost without you.......beautiful admitted love; nicely penned; enjoyable

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Deluke Muwanigwa 08 September 2020

Nice one again. You write well and i dont see any lady refusing you

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Kewayne Wadley

Kewayne Wadley

Groton, Connecticutt
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