cat sat on the wall
not knowing which side to fall
dogs on both to pounce
[I thank carl harris and sandra martyres]
i still dont know the rule of senryu...regardless of formats, this 3 lined-poem is nice to read..naughty dogs..pity cat..naizz
No idea what to say...the cat story is near to my heart. Well said.
an excellent meaningful poem..let me start to think where to fall...10++++
How dogs came on both sides of the wall to falsify the proverb 'Cat on the wall' to show any doubting Thomas? It is humorous.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
let the cat call her mate to divert the dogs' mind... :)