Changed Ur Heart Poem by kayla tucker

Changed Ur Heart

Rating: 4.1


you have changed my heart
now its time to change urs
i will start with a kiss on your neck
then i will place your hand on my waist so i will be close to u
i kiss your heart and carry it every where with me
it makes me smile
it makes me blush
i want everyone to see that you are my one and only true love for ever and always
u always will be i will show your heart to show how much u mean to me
no one can break this bond
i will hold u close so u will never leave my side
i have changed ur heart like u changed mine now both of us have a heart of gold
our love is strong our love will survive
i will love u with everything i have
so as husband and wife we will be together forever i love u till the end of time
(kayla kisses kevins neck till makes a bite mark love u 4 ever) 3

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 03 April 2009

I suppose this bears some relationship to reality. If it does, I hope this writer realizes that this is not enough to hold a love together. I think girls believe this to be the case. It is not true though. Hope this one doesn't learn the hard way. The writing was a bit obsessive and determined as iy should be in this case. It matched the mood. Good job. GW62

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