Dana Georgekish (March 7 1994 / Val'dor)

i like this, but i'd like it a lot better if you chopped the s off of aches. i also probably would have put tummy at end of fourth line somehow and ended with your 4th line being the 5th line (well, maybe not) . BUT since you did it your way (and why not?) , let me say i like the way you put tummy and ache(s) together at the end. thanks for sharing. got milk?

Choco Cake
For goodness sake
Dark and brown
Chow it down

Choco goes south
But tastes so yummy
Ring around mouth
Looks so funny

Mmm lick it up fast
Aint’ this a blast
Endorphin dreamy
Rich and creamy

Choco and me
So free and easy
Hyped up on you
Truffles for two